I take a mental snapshot
of this building I call home.
We thought it was the place
that we could die for.
And die in. We built it
into everything we craved.
But now we hear the call
of somewhere else that we
could float to in a shell,
to reach the shore
of beauty and belonging.
This shell is sad reminder
that the bubble of my hopes
is just a fragile, weightless myth
recorded in a snapshot
of a building I call home.
inspired by:
Day 10 prompt, mobile home, in the Garden of Neuro Institute Poetry Circle
Tuesday 9/10 prompt, snapshot, in Medusa's Kitchen: https://medusaskitchen.blogspot.com/2024/09/trailing-nostalgia.html
dVerse 9/10 prompt to write about the sea or ocean: https://dversepoets.com/2024/09/10/by-the-beautiful-sea/
published in Medusa's Kitchen:
published in Substack:
This is very poignant, Nolcha.
I think most people would benefit to resettle every once in a while...
All the poignancy of the seashell and more...that emptiness is galling.
A very poignant write. Thank you for sharing!
I’m in a similar position,Nolcha, only I want to move on to be with my daughter and grandsons. I love the thought of floating in a shell and these lines especially:
‘This shell is sad reminderthat the bubble of my hopes
is just a fragile, weightless myth’.
Kim R.