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Out of Reach

  • Writer: Nolcha Fox
    Nolcha Fox
  • Jun 11, 2024
  • 1 min read

An empty lot,

a moonless night,

the only light

some broken bulbs

that swing from spider webs.


A door that creaks.

The handle melts.

I walk into a lobby 

filled with broken vows

and wilted flowers.


I pull my body down a hall

of crooked doors 

that open up to

bedrooms full of 

porcelain dolls.


The hall ends at a window

opened to a pit

of black despair.

I have no other place

to go and so I …..


published in Entropy

 
 
 

5件のコメント


Björn Rudberg
Björn Rudberg
2024年6月12日

I left a comment on your medium posting.

いいね!
Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
2024年8月21日
返信先

Thank you so much, Björn!

いいね!

dorahak
dorahak
2024年6月11日

Every line grabs me, but these get at the heart of this despair-filled nighttime hotel as you walk us through: "I walk into a lobby 

filled with broken vows

and wilted flowers." The melting objects, the hallucinatory dolls, a vision of a space leading to one destination. The poetic voice to me is so reminiscent of the Eagles' "Hotel California." Same vibe, so well done!

いいね!
Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
2024年8月21日
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Thank you so much! It's a creepy hotel I don't want to visit.

いいね!
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