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Writer's pictureNolcha Fox

Out of Reach

An empty lot,

a moonless night,

the only light

some broken bulbs

that swing from spider webs.


A door that creaks.

The handle melts.

I walk into a lobby 

filled with broken vows

and wilted flowers.


I pull my body down a hall

of crooked doors 

that open up to

bedrooms full of 

porcelain dolls.


The hall ends at a window

opened to a pit

of black despair.

I have no other place

to go and so I …..


published in Entropy

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Björn Rudberg
Björn Rudberg
Jun 12

I left a comment on your medium posting.

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
Aug 21
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Thank you so much, Björn!

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dorahak
dorahak
Jun 11

Every line grabs me, but these get at the heart of this despair-filled nighttime hotel as you walk us through: "I walk into a lobby 

filled with broken vows

and wilted flowers." The melting objects, the hallucinatory dolls, a vision of a space leading to one destination. The poetic voice to me is so reminiscent of the Eagles' "Hotel California." Same vibe, so well done!

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
Aug 21
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Thank you so much! It's a creepy hotel I don't want to visit.

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