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Yvonne Osborne
Yvonne Osborne
27 sept 2024

well....guest is me this took me by surprise too....

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
03 oct 2024
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Thank you - I was surprised when I wrote the ending.

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Invitado
27 sept 2024

This took me by surprise! Death, indeed.... all dressed up. Well done.

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
03 oct 2024
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Thank you! I suppose even death needs someone to drink with, every once in awhile.

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Björn Rudberg
Björn Rudberg
27 sept 2024

Oh yes... I also saw the lobby as a place to wait.

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
03 oct 2024
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Yes! Time stops in hotel lobbies.

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Invitado
27 sept 2024

I love this! Short and to the point. Just like death. I hope she got the drink first. (Jane)

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
03 oct 2024
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Jane, I'll have to write a follow-up poem about that drink. Thanks!

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Kim Russell
Kim Russell
27 sept 2024

You captured the hotel lobby so well in so few words, Nolcha. It sums up how I feel about hotels.

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
03 oct 2024
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I think the ghost of dispair haunts hotels. Thanks, Kim!

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