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Enough



The wind begun to rock the grass

With threatening tunes and low, —

He flung a menace at the earth,

A menace at the sky.

– “A Thunder-Storm” by Emily Dickinson


I held my breath,

I held my tongue.

I let you fling

your words around.


The wind begun to rock the grass

With threatening tunes and low, —

He flung a menace at the earth,

A menace at the sky.


You were a sudden

tempest tossing, 

loud and large before

I could say anything.


The wind begun to rock the grass

With threatening tunes and low, —

He flung a menace at the earth,

A menace at the sky.


Enough. I finally had my fill.

I released a thunderstorm.

I shouted, sang in my own voice,

a menace to the earth and sky.


The wind begun to rock the grass

With threatening tunes and low, —

He flung a menace at the earth,

A menace at the sky.


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Guest
Sep 01

You caught the essence of a couple becoming the beast! I love that the fight becomes equal ...💜

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
Sep 02
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Thank you! The beast was released.....

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Helen Dehner
Helen Dehner
Aug 29

A beautifully composed poem with Dickinson's lines artfully placed. Cheers.

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
Aug 30
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Thank you, Helen!

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Kim Russell
Kim Russell
Aug 28

The title gave me an inkling as to the subject of your poem, Nolcha, and the poem gave me that feeling. I love that you chose a glossa from an Emily Dickinson poem and that it stands out from the shorter-lined stanzas. A poem I can identify with – it is so satisfying to release a thunderstorm and sing in one’s own voice.

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
Aug 30
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Thanks, Kim! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I love Emily Dickinson. Yes, it is satisfying to release that thunderstorm, but it scares the dogs!

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Guest
Aug 28

We all have a breaking point! You and Emily make a nice team.

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
Aug 30
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Yes, we do, and that breaking point can come unexpectedly. Thanks!

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Dwight
Dwight
Aug 28

Nicely done!

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
Aug 30
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Thank you, Dwight!

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