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Drunk on Summer

  • Writer: Nolcha Fox
    Nolcha Fox
  • Aug 26, 2024
  • 1 min read

Updated: Aug 28, 2024



The waning days of summer pretend to be the main course, not the leftovers. They pile my plate with second and third blooms of orange lilies, pink hollyhocks, purple and white columbine, and the purple dragons of lamium. “Feast, feast!” the birds tweet as they swoop and dive, a deliberate distraction from the burning bush leaves turning to fire, the maple leaves oozing into red, and the random cottonwood branches sporting yellow leaves.


The bees are drunk on pollen.

Butterflies pull them over,

make a citizen’s arrest.


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Invitado
29 ago 2024

A wondrous menagerie of summer images, with the foreshadowing of Autumn ones waiting in the wings. What a clever haiku at the end!

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
30 ago 2024
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Thank you! That haiku was lots of fun to write.

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kimberly.ann.glover
28 ago 2024

Love the personification of the butterflies and the bees!

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
30 ago 2024
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Thank you, Kimberly!

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starlingsson
27 ago 2024

Really, superb..this is a haibun

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
28 ago 2024
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I'm glad you like it - I submitted it to Beautiful Haibun!

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Kim Russell
Kim Russell
27 ago 2024

I love the title of your haibun, Nolcha, the use of colour, and the meal analogy, but my favourite part is the haiku – you must have had so much fun with this one!

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
28 ago 2024
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Thank you, Kim! I did have fun with it!

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Invitado
26 ago 2024

The bees are drunk on pollen.

Butterflies pull them over,

make a citizen’s arrest.”


Love it!🐝

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
27 ago 2024
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Hi, Melissa 😁

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