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Writer's pictureNolcha Fox

Drunk on Summer

Updated: Aug 28



The waning days of summer pretend to be the main course, not the leftovers. They pile my plate with second and third blooms of orange lilies, pink hollyhocks, purple and white columbine, and the purple dragons of lamium. “Feast, feast!” the birds tweet as they swoop and dive, a deliberate distraction from the burning bush leaves turning to fire, the maple leaves oozing into red, and the random cottonwood branches sporting yellow leaves.


The bees are drunk on pollen.

Butterflies pull them over,

make a citizen’s arrest.


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Guest
Aug 29

A wondrous menagerie of summer images, with the foreshadowing of Autumn ones waiting in the wings. What a clever haiku at the end!

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
Aug 30
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Thank you! That haiku was lots of fun to write.

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kimberly.ann.glover
Aug 28

Love the personification of the butterflies and the bees!

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
Aug 30
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Thank you, Kimberly!

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starlingsson
Aug 27

Really, superb..this is a haibun

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
Aug 28
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I'm glad you like it - I submitted it to Beautiful Haibun!

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Kim Russell
Kim Russell
Aug 27

I love the title of your haibun, Nolcha, the use of colour, and the meal analogy, but my favourite part is the haiku – you must have had so much fun with this one!

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
Aug 28
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Thank you, Kim! I did have fun with it!

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Guest
Aug 26

The bees are drunk on pollen.

Butterflies pull them over,

make a citizen’s arrest.”


Love it!🐝

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
Aug 27
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Hi, Melissa 😁

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