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Driving Dangerously

  • Writer: Nolcha Fox
    Nolcha Fox
  • Aug 22, 2024
  • 1 min read

Updated: Aug 26, 2024



My lazy eye

turns inward and

I see twice as much.


Driving is a

challenge when the

double lines quadruple.


I don’t know which

lane I’m in, or

if I’m in the lines.


Traffic doubles,

causing instant

claustrophobia.


Now my husband

drives me, certain

if he won’t, I’ll die.


Triversen poem inspired by:


For Living Poetry prompt:


published in Substack:

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Invitado
24 ago 2024

Bravo! nice one


much♡love

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
24 ago 2024
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Thank you! 😊

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Invitado
24 ago 2024

Gosh, this would make driving difficult. A lovely poem, Nolcha.

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
24 ago 2024
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Yes, driving is a challenge - thank you!

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Invitado
23 ago 2024

Yes, best to keep away from the steering wheel Nolca! Kim The Cheessellers wife

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
23 ago 2024
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I agree. I need to get my princess crown on and ride in the back seat.

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humanist55
23 ago 2024

You carried us along on an anxious trip with this poem, Nolcha, and the form was perfect for it...

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
23 ago 2024
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A big thanks from the Anxiety Queen!

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Invitado
23 ago 2024

You carried us along on an anxious trip with this poem, Nolcha, and the form was perfect for it...

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
23 ago 2024
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Thank you, I'm the queen of anxiety!

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