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Driving Dangerously

  • Writer: Nolcha Fox
    Nolcha Fox
  • Aug 22, 2024
  • 1 min read

Updated: Aug 26, 2024



My lazy eye

turns inward and

I see twice as much.


Driving is a

challenge when the

double lines quadruple.


I don’t know which

lane I’m in, or

if I’m in the lines.


Traffic doubles,

causing instant

claustrophobia.


Now my husband

drives me, certain

if he won’t, I’ll die.


Triversen poem inspired by:


For Living Poetry prompt:


published in Substack:

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Gäst
24 aug. 2024

Bravo! nice one


much♡love

Gilla
Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
24 aug. 2024
Svarar

Thank you! 😊

Gilla

Gäst
24 aug. 2024

Gosh, this would make driving difficult. A lovely poem, Nolcha.

Gilla
Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
24 aug. 2024
Svarar

Yes, driving is a challenge - thank you!

Gilla

Gäst
23 aug. 2024

Yes, best to keep away from the steering wheel Nolca! Kim The Cheessellers wife

Gilla
Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
23 aug. 2024
Svarar

I agree. I need to get my princess crown on and ride in the back seat.

Gilla

humanist55
23 aug. 2024

You carried us along on an anxious trip with this poem, Nolcha, and the form was perfect for it...

Gilla
Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
23 aug. 2024
Svarar

A big thanks from the Anxiety Queen!

Gilla

Gäst
23 aug. 2024

You carried us along on an anxious trip with this poem, Nolcha, and the form was perfect for it...

Redigerad
Gilla
Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
23 aug. 2024
Svarar

Thank you, I'm the queen of anxiety!

Gilla
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