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Autumn Dream

  • Writer: Nolcha Fox
    Nolcha Fox
  • Sep 24, 2024
  • 1 min read

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Leaves dress up in lipstick red and lemon gold to dance in wind that chills the bones. One by one, leaves kiss the ground, goodbye to summer’s blooms. Too soon, the leaves will crinkle brown and crumble to the touch. Autumn isn’t long enough to tire of time that turns to ash in fireplaces, not long enough to pull out sweaters hidden from the heat. I’d like more days of sun that slants and sleeps in teacups cooling in my hands. Autumn is a dream that ends in white.


Too soon 

I’ll wake 

to flakes of snow.  


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23 comentarios


Invitado
26 sept 2024

HI Nolcha, this is a wonderful haibun. I am not a fan of autumn because winter comes next. I don't like cold weather. Robbie

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
26 sept 2024
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We moved from Los Angeles, the land of no seasons, to Wyoming, with four seasons (more, if you count tourist season, fly season, construction season.....) I enjoy the seasonal changes, but not always everything that goes with each season. I don't mind winter when I'm inside and cozy warm.

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Invitado
26 sept 2024

"Autumn is a dream that ends in white."

True. :)


-kittysverses


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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
26 sept 2024
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Thank you, Kitty! I'd like that dream to last longer.

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kimberly.ann.glover
26 sept 2024

I love the elegant simplicity of y9ur haiku.

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
26 sept 2024
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Thank you, Kim!

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Invitado
25 sept 2024

i adore the image of sunlight sleeping in a teacup! thank you! <3 xx, ren https://therenclub.wordpress.com/2024/09/24/kiss-me-a-promise/

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
26 sept 2024
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I commented on your poem in your blog. I subscribed, so I'm looking forward to enjoying more of your poetry!

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Invitado
25 sept 2024

Such melancholy! I know many of us have said how much we love autumn, but like you, I can't help but feel apprehension for what's ahead. (Jane)

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Nolcha Fox
Nolcha Fox
26 sept 2024
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Thank you, Jane! If it weren't for the ice I can't see, winter would be just dandy. I'm not anxious to fall again and break more bones.

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